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IMDB rating: 5.60 Plot: Christy (Zehetner) returns to her hometown years after a car accident that disfigured her older sister. Haunted by the accident in which she was the driver, she learns that her worst nightmares have either come true … or are about to. |
Actors: Settle Matthew,Christie Warren,Davis Don S.,Gilmore Patrick,McBeath Tom,Mulligan Brian,Perez Timothy Paul,Tracy John Emmet,Verdoni Bruno,Horror,Thriller,
how can i add onomatopoeia to my poem.?
also what can i change.
Once upon a doom filled night,along that God forsaken road,
Aimlessly I walked as my shadow flickered in the streetlights eerie glow.
Beneath my feet the paving stones lay split asunder,
Echoing to a passing lorry’s roar and thunder,
That swiftly disappeared into the threatening dark.
Then, with rising horror clutching at my fearful heart,
I reached my journey’s end.
That hellish haunted house. What dreaded secrets did it hold?
And ere the night was through!
Then from the depths of Hell’s dark pit
A spectral owl perched on a branch,
And pierced my heart with soulless stare
That warned…No closer ,if you dare.
With gaping beak,it said to me,staring with it’s coal black eye,
"Leave now,leave now or you will die!"
I turned and fled,all reason gone,
With icy fingers clawing at my spine.
Return to that evil house and road accursed,I will refrain
If, with God’s help,my soul and sanity I might regain.
But in my mind I still hear that croaking voice and see that coal black eye
"Leave now,leave now or you will surely die!"
Running aimlessly, I found myself where I started
Lost in this small world where everything departed
The nocturnal creature shouting the same phrase
Alone in the same old haunted house he stays
I turned back and noticed the coal black eyes.
Blank, reflecting only the night sky.
Slowly, the door from the haunted house opened, but no one was there.
He dove through the door with the wind blowing threw his feathered body.
Everything was over before I knew it, and from where I came, I returned.
Everything was normal and forgotten. Everything I knew went unturned.
I did only notice one small change, possessed eyes of an owl that was unnaturally strange.
Not only had they grown in me.
But they also had grown in everyone around me.
amazing! keep on writing and posting them
Katie | Feb 08, 2010









